A little changing in the lay out of this thread
I am going to put on the chapters in the first post
so the first chapter is on an other place then were it should have been. to find the first chapter and the following ones just click on the links
First Chapter Ilandriel
Second Chapter War Meeting
Third Chapter Battlefield
Fourth Chapter Risha
Fifth Chapter Damyion
Set made by the wonderful Dany-chan
Last edited by thurnwenthil; 08-30-2012 at 06:41 PM.
Re: Warrior Tribe
I have the second chapter ready tho
Re: Warrior Tribe
early the next morning was Ilandriel awoke and in full battle armor
and giving orders to the soldiers who were running around with crossbows, long bows or swords. Both the men and women were all ready for the coming battle, they were excited but also their was fear, yes they feared this coming battle.
It would be a battle like they never fought before.
They were thinking how many of their brethren would come and help them in this fight, even if they tribe would all come the difference in strength would still be gigantic. In silence they hoped they would win without being send to oblivion but the people knew that the only chance to win was to take that army with them in their down fall.
Because the outnumbering was 1 against 4500 of the warriors of darkness they weren't much of a fight but this was a bit too much if it was 2000 less the angelic warriors wouldn't fear they wouldn't even have ask their brethren for help. There would have been losses but not a chance that whole the tribe would vanish.
Unlike now, but not all will disappear the children would find a place were they can live and survive until they are old enough to fight, they will find partners so the tribe would survive and flourish when the time of the angelic warriors would come again.
Ilandriel felt suddenly an other presence familiar yet vague, she started to walk around the palace, in the hallway she saw her aunt standing there, Igraine was in full battle armor as well, Ilandriel hurried towards Igraine and ask “why are you here aunt Igraine? I thought you would send only a few people who wanted to fight with us”
Igraine answered “how can I only let my cousins fight with only a few people this is the battle we have waited for since our last winning of the war we knew that this was coming, also that our tribes time is at an end”
Ilandriel was stunned “is everyone aware of the price they are going to pay if they are going to battle with us?”
Igraine simple said “yes”
“then let me speak to your people so they know they have a choice”plead Ilandriel because she felt it was necessary that they knew what they were beginning and so they could still back out of it.
Igraine said to this “you can tell them but I don't think they would listen to you, not because you don't have overweight in your speaking but they all feel they weight this battle has in the air”
Igraine and Ilandriel started to walk to the balcony were most of the time the children were show to the people when they were born. Since speaking to the tribe was mostly done within the palace walls in one of the rooms since the angelic warriors talked most of the time in small groups at a time so it was easier for them and there was then no need to lift their voice, they normally spoke soft.
But now Ilandriel needed to speak to a lot of people at the same time not only the butterfly wing tribe but also her own angelic wing tribe. She wouldn't even think to ask her father for help since after the first few years he wouldn't even have time for his daughter for normal things or the tribe stuff.
They were now at the balcony Ilandriel took a deep breath before she started to give her speech to the angelic warriors as the butterfly negotiators “I want you to understand that this speech is not to bring the moral down but I want to make clear to everyone that who will stay and fight with me would be facing a certain death for sure,and I want to give all of you a change to back out of this fight and survive to fight another day in the next era, we still need more of those people, until the children are ready to make a choice,
I want to tell you all that you are all free to decide what you want to do. I am not a person that would keep one of you against their will here. I also know that it would be a hard job to raise the children and teach them everything from both tribes because the young ones need to been learned not only things from one tribe. They need to learn from both so they can do both things at the same time, we can not afford that our tribes are divided, they need to start living in the same village this would have been one of my next plans to do but this war came between it so I want to make sure that it will be done they need to learn the valor and understanding is needed in live, so who want to go to teach them this?”
after this speech there was a moment of silence, then one after another showed signs of disbelieve that their queen would say something like this, that retried wasn't wrong but a tactical move to fight another day, their queen who loved winning in those battles who's tactics were great tried to stop them to walk into this battlefield. That was impossible ,it should be a joke, not for real.
But it wasn't they all felt it deep down inside them their queen was serious about it. Then the question was why would she do it, why would she ask them to do something like this. Then lighting strikes with all of them this battle would end in all of their deaths even when they would win their will be no one to tell people about it.
In that split second that made it clear why their queen Ilandriel would do both tribes took her into their hearts and they would gladly pay the price to win this war, you could see their faces turn from despair to hope that maybe there was a way that some of them would survive and tell the would about this glorious queen, still a child but so wise that not a single elder dared to voice their doubts, because the speech their queen hold was about the people's doubt as well as their queens. The people were glad they had a choice but they wouldn't take it, because it was not only their duty but also their will to stand beside this young queen, who wanted them to live even though she would have marched to death herself without a second thought.
One of each tribe spoke with a lot voice from under the balcony “we know that if we march with you we will face our deaths and the death of most of our friends and family members, but we will pay this when it means that we hold back the hold of the evilness in this world, we only hope and pray that the surviving children and elder you send away will be ready for the coming evil when it is again at full strength that they have formed alliances with others with the true warrior strength and valor but also with the negotiators urge for peace and understanding.”
the people made a silent prayer for the safety of the ones that wouldn't fight and for their own sake that they would win even when the price was so high.
Ilandriel voiced out all there hope with the words “we surely will win this war and destroy the evil creatures to the verge of extinction.”
Ilandriel called out for her lieutenants and looked at her aunt Igraine so she could name her second in commands, for using that big of an army there weren't a lot of people who let them, you may think that was strange but for them it wasn't necessary when the tactic was known to everyone it was easy to act accordingly but what her and her aunt's people needed to understand was her place of fighting was not from the lines of warriors but next to them, it wasn't common to do that but it was her character not to lead by only giving orders but also to do it. When the time would come and they would try the wedge technique she would be at the beginning of the wedge to lead the way into the enemy troops because of this her warriors would follow her blindly because they respected her with more than fear like they did by her father and brothers who led the army as well they showed their strength to make sure the warriors would follow them. But that wasn't how Ilandriel would do it she would do it first and expect the rest to follow her lead in valor and strength.
At the beginning of the meeting Everand said “are you sure you want to do it,”
Ilandriel looked at the fair looking angelic warrior, she found out that there was only worry in the emerald colored eyes of his that matched his wings, by looking at him you would think he was one of the warriors who had the power of warmth but he was gifted with the power of understanding the earth and the sun something that was very rare because it was opposite powers the normal duo powers would be moon and earth that was more common.
Ilandriel answered him “I am not sure how to do this the only think I do know is that that army need to be stopped, I don't even know if we are the right people to do it but I can't sit and watch them destroy most of the humans living in that world.”
“that we all understand,”said Flare what wasn't his real name but his temper was like his wings (his wings looked like flames), when most people who knew him think back they don't even remember his real name. And thinking back I don't even think he himself wouldn't remember his own name.
There were all together only 12 people in the war meeting Flare and Everand were the people Ilandriel relayed the most on, there was also the black winged Yiante and the moonlight winged Veryond. The last one of Ilandriel's lieutenants was the aquamarine winged Sayac.
The others were Igraine's lieutenants Ilandriel once knew their names, but she hadn't see them the last 6 years when she ruled over the angelic warriors she wasn't able to visit Igraine's paradise. The best place in this world were peace and understanding filled the air and kindness was the emotion everyone used. Even in there sword play there was a kindness in that which was hard to describe.
What Ilandriel suddenly remembered was the shape and the coloring of their wings changed over time, when they evolved and learned. while the angelic wings stayed the same after the person becomes an adult and has chosen the path he or she would take.
It wasn't common to have more colored wings like the butterfly winged those wings could have all the colors of the rainbow and more.
And these 6 negotiators were the best if you saw their wings, the patterns on their wings were colorful and pure like the flowers that bloom just after winter. But as different as the seasons that change and the people that are living on this planet.
Igraine, Wasrend, Realtris, Amerinace, Brythril and Moshurand, Ilandriel remembered the names of the other 5 members or was it that Igraine projected their names into her mind.
After the introductions done by Ilandriel the war-meeting started.
There wasn't much to describe only how to die by taking the most enemies with them, and there was a lot of things to talk about
“what is the problem in taking the mortal wounds like I always have done in a battle”said Ilandriel
“this isn't a battle we have ever fought before and it will take a few millenniums for it to be this far again. This will be a battle of endurance and we need our warrior-leader to be strong and to stay with us as long as she possible can and wounding yourself because your soldiers are about to die, this time it isn't the way”said Everand “we are better ,of when you fight in the ranks at the back and not at the front line like you always do”
“that I can't do,Everand. It is my way of fighting I can't fight in the back out of harms way.”Ilandriel said “Igraine that is your place to oversee the this battle, I will not change my fighting style.”
“then I will fight beside you”said Igraine
“now we need to find a way to fight that if possible we have a few survivors”
continued Ilandriel this war meeting “how can we win? Yiante and Brythril how is the powers difference in our ranks? How many have a huge power reserve? Sayac and Realtris both of you with 200 warriors are going to fly over the army and attack their back while we keep them busy at their front. Everand and Moshurand can you take the west wing, Amerinace and Veryond you two take the east side of the army, Flare and Wasrend you are helping Igraine and me in the front>”
they thought a moment about this tactic it wasn't a tactic that was thought about in every small detail but with this kind of manpower difference you hardly can plan.
Brythril asked “why do we need to know how many of us have a immense reverse of power what kind of power do you mean.”
Yiante answered that question before Ilandriel could do that “we want to know how many of the warriors are able to use magic under pressure and as last resort there was a lot of reserve power needed. Because
a few of the spells they need to master before it was to late, the spell was to make an weapon from the nature around them or themselves, but only to use it as last resort because the damage to the earth would be tremendous. That was the reason our queen asked it”
“wow, and that you know what your queen meant with only one question”asked Brythril.
“of course we do, it is easy to find out her thought pattern for a battle that is one of the few things that hasn't changed over these last 6 years”said Veryond.
“then I will go check the warriors and negotiators to find out the magic reserves of those people who will fight”made Yiante her decision and stood up and left the meeting room by the door she turned and asked “ Brythril are you coming with me you can help me find the strongest negotiators”
Brythril hurried towards the door and both of them left the war-meeting to the others since they knew what they should do.
“are there more things to discuss?”asked Sayac
“no, only how will fight the enemy generals”answered Ilandriel
Sayac and Realtris left to find their 200 warriors to attack the enemy in their back.
Only the ones that would divided themselves into 3 armies it wasn't each of attack force only had 600 warriors and negotiators. But they knew they had only one chance to do it right. Or else there was no coming back.
After the talk about strategies was over they tried to talk about some light stuff like what to do if they survived or the fun places they want to visit after this was all over even when they knew the chance was small they wold survive.
After a few hours Ilandriel went to her room to rest and meditate before the coming this last fight.
But Igraine, Flare,Wasrend talked a little more about the next day.
Set made by the wonderful Dany-chan
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Re: Warrior Tribe
wow is long haha but took my time
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i must say i like your story and can't wait the next one which u'll post when will be ready and if u had spelling mistakes - didn't look at them - i was focused on the story
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I voted for this one did I not anyway I really liked this entry and when I am feeling better I will read the second part as it is long and I have been pretty sick lately. I look forward to reading the second part
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dany- still busy writing the third chapter, yeah please say it if you spelling mistakes I know I a bad at those things.
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I love the idea of an Angelic creature living here on earth, they must be lovely and menacing in the most graceful ways. I also enjoy reading of a female protagonist in a story since I'm all for woman as a hero instead of just being a damsel in distress.
I will wait patiently for the third chapter to come out
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i hope we'll get to know soon how it continues n.n
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