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Old 03-12-2012   #11 (permalink)
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hi.
didnt know that there is something like this in AC (:
the title caught my attention.
but can i ask for a sypnosis? (:im too lazy reading the story now (:
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always come to the library and you will see them.
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Just read Chapter 1, after Prologue.

Nice humor. Love the hay that bothers him w/o touching him, and which the farmer warns him not to ruin for the cows! ROFL-worthy

Great action sequence. Enjoyed reading his analysis of the attacker's likely fighting style.

Glad the farmer persuaded him at the end.

Looking forward to reading Ch. 2!
Thanks for the feedback, Zonie.

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hi.
didnt know that there is something like this in AC (:
the title caught my attention.
but can i ask for a sypnosis? (:im too lazy reading the story now (:
That is a good idea. I just added one - that synopsis is the grand plan, if I ever get to finish it, that is. lol.

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i already started reading yesterday and finished the prologue.
it seems good. but when i read the sypnosis
it definitely a must read. i enjoy reading this kind of story (:
BTW, thanks for the sypnosis (:

*and of to chapter 1*
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finished reading it.
liking it so far.
can't wait what happens next
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Thanks zyxw.
I was looking through the drafts of this story that I already have written (I just need to piece them together and revise them, stuff like that), and it appears this will be a very loooonngggg story.

I got *edit* 18 chapters and the total word count on my .doc file is over 23,000. Going by the plot it's nearly halfway through. Too darn long.




*EDIT* uploaded Chapters IV through VII. I won't be touching it again for some time. lol.
Fellas, I would appreciate feedback. Y'know, any constructive criticisms or general suggestions, recommendations, or questions, or just simple thoughts on the story and how it's going and how it's told. Arigato, in advance.

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nice. fight scene. that cursed sword of his has piqued my interest. I smell something juicy. Great Job Kage
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Thanks Zura.
Updated with 2 chapters!
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Updated with Chapter X and XI.
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Finished Chapter 2 - yes, I know I'm behind, but this deserves the time to savor & appreciate! I enjoy your style.
Keep going; I know I'll get to it all eventually!
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his eyes were the decisive evidence of madness lusting for irrational bloodletting. I’ve seen eyes like those before.” In my reflection in a small pond in the eastern continent, Ezkil didn’t add.
<3 that ...

Oh, that befuddled scout is almost cute! - especially when he's regretting tipping the authorities off about the "suspected fugitives'" location. XD
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