| | | ||||
| | ![]() | ![]() | | | |
| | | ||||
| | | ||||
| | #13 (permalink) | ||
| Umagon's Pony | Quote:
![]() Quote:
| ||
| | |
| | #14 (permalink) |
| Ultimate Hokage Join Date: Oct 2010
Posts: 4,498
| i already started reading yesterday and finished the prologue. it seems good. but when i read the sypnosis it definitely a must read. i enjoy reading this kind of story (: BTW, thanks for the sypnosis (: *and of to chapter 1* |
| | |
| | #16 (permalink) |
| Umagon's Pony |
Thanks zyxw. I was looking through the drafts of this story that I already have written (I just need to piece them together and revise them, stuff like that), and it appears this will be a very loooonngggg story. I got *edit* 18 chapters and the total word count on my .doc file is over 23,000. Going by the plot it's nearly halfway through. Too darn long. ![]() *EDIT* uploaded Chapters IV through VII. I won't be touching it again for some time. lol. Fellas, I would appreciate feedback. Y'know, any constructive criticisms or general suggestions, recommendations, or questions, or just simple thoughts on the story and how it's going and how it's told. Arigato, in advance. Last edited by KageNoKensai; 03-14-2012 at 09:26 AM. |
| | |
| | #17 (permalink) |
| Ultimate Hokage |
nice. fight scene. that cursed sword of his has piqued my interest. I smell something juicy. Great Job Kage
__________________ What's life without Laughter? Just laugh "You must prove more patient than a caterpillar, more willing to survive than a cockroach, and more stubborn than a leech - or you will definitely fail" ~ Legendary Moonlight Sculptor |
| | |
| | #20 (permalink) | |
| Ultimate Hokage Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: \(^,^)/ Doin' the happy dance cuz finished w/ work!
Posts: 3,513
Blog Entries: 28 |
Finished Chapter 2 - yes, I know I'm behind, but this deserves the time to savor & appreciate! I enjoy your style. ![]() Keep going; I know I'll get to it all eventually! ![]() EDIT - Reading Ch. 3: Quote:
Oh, that befuddled scout is almost cute! - especially when he's regretting tipping the authorities off about the "suspected fugitives'" location. XD
__________________ ![]() AC Story Winner Feb, Mar, June (tied), Aug, Nov & Dec 2012 * My Stories Here Vote in / Enter AC Library Contests Sig- Dany1908 Last edited by ZonieCatz; 03-27-2012 at 04:11 AM. Reason: comment ch. 3 | |
| | |
![]() |
| Tags |
| adventure, fantasy, story |
| Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests) | |
| Thread Tools | |
| |