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Old 05-12-2012   #1 (permalink)
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I plan to post all my poetry in this one thread and will update it periodically. So, feel free to subscribe if you would like to keep up w/ my new writing releases.

The first poem I plan to share is a bit about my own personality and how I feel about helping others when I can. Hope you all enjoy it!

Feedback & Commentary are much appreciated!

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Here To Help

It is not the fact of the matter
That matters so much as the reason
Which drives me to do what I do
And be who I am

I do this because I can
Knowing the consequences
Casting aside the reward
And holding tight to my beliefs

I am here to help
Ready, able, and willing
Wanting to make a difference
For you, myself, and everyone else

I will be the angel with wings outstretched
Soaring through the beautiful sky
Always watching over you
Guiding you to the light

I will be the demon spitting fire
Lurking around in the depths
Accepting the hate you may desire
Taking the painful sins upon myself

I will be a gleaming sword
With an edge so sharp
To cut down those who oppose you
Saving you the guilt of harming others

I will be a shining suit of armor
With metal so strong
To protect you from any blows
Allowing you to be safe forevermore

I will be your sun
Waking you with rays so bright
To let you know a new day has come
One with many opportunities and promises

I will be your moon
Basking you in illuminated light
Giving you peace and quiet
To ponder and think about whatever you want

I will be the voice others will hear
When you do not have the courage to speak
Letting others hear your feelings
And allowing them to understand you

I will be the ear that will listen
Silent without words
Intently hearing everything you say
When no one else will

The possibilities are endless
For what I can be for you
What I can do for you
And how I do it

Do not try to intently question why
Or gain suspicion against me
For the ambitions I have behind helping you
Have no such reason to be treated so

I am here to help
Whether you see it or not
Whether you want to believe it or not
Whether you want to accept it or not

I do it because I want to
I do it because I can
I do it because I believe it is the right thing to do
To help you...
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I'm not much of a poem reader.. Nor do i love poems exceptionally, but i think this one's not bad i guess

It's nice to always want to help others!
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I'm not much of a poem reader.. Nor do i love poems exceptionally, but i think this one's not bad i guess

It's nice to always want to help others!
Thanks ^^ I appreciate you checking it out and giving your feedback. Means alot.
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Figured I would slip this one into my thread to keep everything together. Basically about friendship and the power of two compared to one. The first half with different colors signifies two streams of thought, while the last past is both of them coming together into one stream of thought. Enjoy!

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Binomial Fusion [Poem]

I shine with the daylight, rays gleaming with luster
Power to behold, never to be selfish and withhold
Beauty I find in protecting others, like a well-painted canvas
Rising like sunshine, falling like daybreak
With thoughts so strong and intentions so bold
I’ll strike at your core like never before


I glimmer in the moonlight, basking in silent ambience
Strength that is never fleeting, causing you to retreat
Lust for battle, a craving to satisfy
Proud to my last breath, even to death
With feelings overwhelming, a desire to do more
I’ll attack you till your no more


My heart on fire, passion that takes wings and soars
Irresistible desire that spreads like consuming flames
Fanned by my conviction and ambition
Taking me to a whole new level, like decibels in my soul
Searching for darkness to extinguish with my light
I come at you and bring the fight


My eyes glow with a fierce glimmer, hungry for battle
Unimaginable odds, never once scared or awed
Shining like a star, with a determination to go far
Energy increasing, like the tides from the moon
I make light from darkness, revealing everything hidden
I’ll bring you trouble, so prepare for the struggle


Together we stand stronger than any force
Powers radiating, rising with the sun and falling with the moon
Light into darkness, darkness into light
Spirits ablaze, lost in the fray
Chances now doubled, twice more than ever before
Prepare yourself and stay vigilant

For one man alone has within him an unbeatable strength
The power to make a difference, for himself and many
But when that one man meets another, forming an alliance
An overwhelming fusion of willpower and resolve
Will lead to the brightest and purest light
With roots stemming from camaraderie and friendship

A binomial sum that is fused into one…

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hi just came to let u know i put the thread in here that you'll find easy next time in case are more and goes down o.o

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Here's a poem I wrote for my mom for Mother's Day...

A Beautiful Soul

A soul is unique and powerful on it’s own
The physical person may warp or twist it
Most of the time not paying much attention to it
But keep a watchful eye because it is apparent

You, my mother, in particular are something special
What words can not fully describe
And what basic sight can not reveal
Is that your soul is beautiful

You were always so strong and independent
Taking care of business without hesitation
Risking everything for a brighter future
Almost appearing to be transcendent

Never wavering from the crush of defeat
Driven by ambition that could not be beat
You strived to do so much more
Carrying on your desires to a young baby boy

Looking back now it all seemed so fast
The years I spent with you
The time you gave up for me
Reminding me of our blessed past

They say we don’t realize that we had something good until it’s gone
A statement that I feel doesn’t apply to me
For right here, right now I know and I believe
That you were the one who taught me to achieve

The fan to the fire in my eyes
The strength to the character I exemplify
The kindness to my heart that shares love
The optimism to my smile and laughs


It is all apparent through me
That you are a blessing for free
Having accomplished great things
Taking on whatever life brings

What some may not realize about you
What others may forget about you
I think about almost daily
Never letting it slip from my thoughts

The choice to bare a child
What signifies you as a mother
Making this day dedicated to you
Is far from the feats you have compiled

For you, my mother, are something special
A God blessed gift given to me
In many more ways than one
Showing that you have a beautiful soul indeed
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I really love this poem.

I bet your mum was really touched when you showed here this.
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I really love this poem.

I bet your mum was really touched when you showed here this.
Thanks Leila ^^ Glad to hear you like it and appreciate you checking it out.
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OhMyGoodness I looooove the poem you wrote to your mom. Its fabulous!
I especially looove the 6th stanza xD

Im sure she'll love this : )
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OhMyGoodness I looooove the poem you wrote to your mom. Its fabulous!
I especially looove the 6th stanza xD

Im sure she'll love this : )
Hehe thanks Fire ^^ Glad to hear you like it and I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

She also did love it. In fact, it made her cry while she was reading it ><
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