lets make a poem!

[easternjohnny]

poem 15
The toys out on the playground,
is hoping I come around,
those things seem wanting my happiness to be profound,
as I can't go on cause of my weighing a lot of pound,

[ellimac23]

Poem #14

as the butterfly flutters on by,
like a bird soaring in the sky,
the kite hover with the winds trail,
and a girl passed by,
the rivers begins to shine as the sun rise
wind begins to whisper in her ears
the noise seeming comes from no where,
for it suddenly screeched with split terror,
the girl look up pale hoping it was a error,
The airplane is drooping its nose to the ground,
the light is blinding yet there is no sound
The spinning blades make the wind scream
Under its unforgiving pressure,
The blood-red morning streams,
Tears of sadistic pleasure
terror, scream, frightened n afraid
I don't want to feel them anymore
so I said no more
I walked silent, I closed my eyes, my ears
no sound, nomore despair
I grabbed a knife n killed thy self (end)

[easternjohnny]

poem 15
The toys out on the playground,
is hoping I come around,
those things seem wanting my happiness to be profound,
as I can't go on cause of my weighing a lot of pound,

[ZonieCatz]

Originally Posted by easternjohnny

poem 15
The toys out on the playground,
is hoping I come around,
those things seem wanting my happiness to be profound,
as I can't go on cause of my weighing a lot of pound,

I stare out the window, through cold pouring rain,
recalling the slide & swings, which await me in vain.

As children, my friends and I had so much fun back there,
midst playing and laughing, we knew not a care.

[SugoiMe]

But all's in the past and the toys lie still;
they sit in the rain, wishing I was 'lil.

Those memories old toy with my mind;
some time ago, I had left it all behind.

[ZonieCatz]

UPDATE poem 15 - NOT FINISHED

The toys out on the playground,
is hoping I come around,
those things seem wanting my happiness to be profound,
as I can't go on cause of my weighing a lot of pound.

I stare out the window, through cold pouring rain,
recalling the slide & swings, which await me in vain.
As children, my friends and I had so much fun back there,
midst playing and laughing, we knew not a care.

But all's in the past and the toys lie still;
they sit in the rain, wishing I was 'lil.
Those memories old toy with my mind;
some time ago, I had left it all behind.

(Ready for next lines...)

[ellimac23]

as time passed |3y, we all got older
|3ut till memories of lil kids will always |3e linger
amidst the rain, cloudy sky, laughter of us echoing in each other mind
|3ecuz we are just a mere children of our childish day

[Mnemosyne33]

But nothing can change what I am today,
Not even the children in us that still play
For I'm my own toy now and all that you'll find
Of childhood in me, with time I will bind.
(end)

[ZonieCatz]

Poem 15 completed

The toys out on the playground,
is hoping I come around,
those things seem wanting my happiness to be profound,
as I can't go on cause of my weighing a lot of pound.

I stare out the window, through cold pouring rain,
recalling the slide & swings, which await me in vain.
As children, my friends and I had so much fun back there,
midst playing and laughing, we knew not a care.

But all's in the past and the toys lie still;
they sit in the rain, wishing I was 'lil.
Those memories old toy with my mind;
some time ago, I had left it all behind.

as time passed |3y, we all got older
|3ut till memories of lil kids will always |3e linger
amidst the rain, cloudy sky, laughter of us echoing in each other mind
|3ecuz we are just a mere children of our childish day

But nothing can change what I am today,
Not even the children in us that still play
For I'm my own toy now and all that you'll find
Of childhood in me, with time I will bind.
(end)

Nice job!

[ellimac23]

mesmerizing the past, will always |3e...
You n meh in my memories