lets make a poem!

[jaceziel]

I dunno if there had been a thread like this before so forgave me if there is.

we post a line(s) related to the poem itself.
you can make as many lines as you want and could be one line too.
the poem ends if the last person to post decide to end it by adding (end) AND he must begin a new poem by starting a line/verse

forum rules apply

and this is NOT a chat thread

for example and to start:



the dead man who lies on the earth
and walks free from the dusk
fears not only us but the rejection of the world
HE CHERISHES THE NEBULOUS TWILIGHT
for all the scenes he saw
he knew it has to end once and for all
And on the the sky is his projected dismay
he wished for one last memory
You KNow we could end it like
HE Wished the end of those overcast days
even to the depth of his sleep. (end)


(pre-formed lines created by artofcreation , maria58 , Lord Ballom and JadeRaven)

please don't insult the maker
and please respect Literature!
and I'll try to update it as possible.
make it original as possible and your own

make the first line now.

edited update: please update it too those who are here since I'll not be always around thank you.

[Unknowned]

lets start

[maria58]

u didnt write this -.-

[Unknowned]

i did make it but i don't own it...beside the thread does not said create your own poem..

[M4G1K5]

you didnt make it either.. you just copied and pasted it.

[maria58]

u have to create ur own and pls less mean crappy sucky words

[jaceziel]

make a line ppl and not too much chatters,

make it into a lines those words of yours

[maria58]

as i saw her dazzle her way in

[Unknowned]

i slap her face and make her suck a pointy pin

[maria58]

Originally Posted by Unknowned

i slap her face and make her suck a pointy pin

wats wrong wid u -.-