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Old 06-14-2012   #1 (permalink)
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'' It is fire burning everywhere ...What i am doing here?...What is this place ...I was in the forest with my friends ...What happened here and how I got in this?" That was what the boy was thinking about...

The boy is smart, handsome, clever and everybody loves him .He is also the leader of football team and in his school all call him “the prince” there.

But a new transfer student came to the school. It was a girl that seems to be sweet but in fact deep inside wasn’t like she acted near other, was evil and ugly. She was in the same class as the boy. The new student introduce herself to all, simple and cold but with her sweet smile that mesmerized all

"My name is Ann. Nice to meet you”

Then the teacher told her to sit next to the boy. She also treats him as a Prince due his look only. With a smile the girl said "Hi, nice to meet you. Hope we get along well. What is your name?" The Boy look at her then turns his head. She said loudly to hear all the class "what a rude boy. I just thought He is kind or something. He looked like a Prince”

In angry Ann sit next to him doesn't believe how he treat her. At lunch break the boy leave the class. She was about to follow him but all the class gather around her . Starting to ask her some question . She forced a smile on her face and answer all the questions . One of them ask her "why did you come to our school?" She stare at them for second and with scary face

"i have something to do here"

All the class was surprised and Ann with smile"just kidding " .All the class start laugh and said " You scared us " ...

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After the school has ended ,Ann was still waiting at the gym room until the night has fallen , At the midnight she started to look for a room that wrote on it "doesn't allow to enter "...

After one an hour of searching , Ann finally found the room ,slowly she was trying to open the door ... Suddenly she heard a sound ,She jumped from her place and hide herself behind some boxes was there.

she saw a strange view there was some people wear a strange clothes ,with masks on their faces that Ann Couldn't recognize who they are ... there was a girl who was screaming for help"i swear , i didn't do anything wrong "...

One of the strange people slap her strongly and with angry said "Don't deny it everyone that broke the Rules should have a punishment and you know how we punish bad person'' ..

The girl with frightened look said " Noooo, please no ,Not that room i don't want to die please ,no " They forced her enter the room and shut her there , there was a lot of screams "No, please ,They come to take me , Please let me out , someone help me"...

When the scream has stop . the strange people left . Ann Looked surprised and frightened talking to herself "What was that? I know that there was a room that nobody allow to enter that i heard a lot of rumors about it . I didn't thought that they use it to punishes people ... To think about it , Who is "they" that the girl was taking about ??... what happened to that girl there ?? "...

Everything was complicated to Ann ... Suddenly someone touched Ann's shoulder That scared her ..
Ann screamed loudly...

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Ann was scared , her heart was beating so fast that she couldn't breath ,Looking at the strange People come back to know what was that loud screaming ...

She was hiding behind the boxes and there is someone who put his hand on her mouth to stop the screaming to avoid being discover by them.

After they left and didn't find anything ... Ann turned back to see who was the person that scared her and save her ...she found that the person was the prince .

He told her angrily " Are you crazy ??? Oh , You really are crazy ...Why are you still at the school at a time like this ?? I Can't believe . Do you know what would happened if they discovered us ?? You shouldn't have see something like this. Don't tell anyone about what you saw or you will be killed by them "

Ann looked Shocked from what the prince told her , She said "You scared me , It was you , Huh , I thought you were one of them . I am Here to find that room , Why are you here ?? "

The prince Sighed " I was spying on them ,there is a lot of people that has been disappeared lately So i wonder what is it ... you... Why are you looking for that room ??"
Ann said sadly " I am dreaming everyday someone screaming in the dark calling for help , that person told me to find a dark room that nobody allowed to enter it and who dare enter it will not get out of that room ... that person has sad ,lonely and scared voice , i want to help that person I searched for that room until i found it ... but still i feel scared , No , No , i have decided to enter it to discover who is that person ... i want to help him "

She was about to leave but the prince grab her hand saying " listen ... First we have to figure out everything about that room before we enter it "
Ann looked at him surprised said "WE??!" The prince said with smile " yeah, we , of course i will help you , I have to find someone there
in that room "

They agreed not to tell about anything ... The next day , the school was like always as if nothing had happened ...When she enter the class Said "Hi "to the prince he turned his head and ignore her ... She get angry and set at her place ... The prince was giggle said " Haha, She is angry , Sorry i Was Joking , Hi " She said to herself with a smile " He is a Devil" ...

After the School they went to the library looking for a book that take about that room ... Ann Found it and while she was looking for the Prince, a Strange person appear In front of her...

To be continues

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nice
u let is in a mystery what is with the girl and what will happen with the boy due the opening
much better than the other story
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I Hope it will be fun to read
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interesting
what a scary girl
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nice 2nd chapter
there is a little bite mistakes but it is good
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well a bit of mystery with the room, who really ann is and the person who scared her(the boy i presume)
if is readable i can read it even if has lots of mistakes lol
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lol knew was the boy
hm kinda rushed felt a bit to me but nice
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really nice! the 2nd part was great..sort of intense
i want to read more and find.. i wonder what is the reason behind what they do :O
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Nice story so far!
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All of you thank you so much
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