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Poem 1 6 25.00%
Poem 2 2 8.33%
Poem 3 3 12.50%
Poem 4 1 4.17%
Poem 5 8 33.33%
Poem 6 4 16.67%
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Old 06-28-2012   #1 (permalink)
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Default Mothers Day Poetry Competition

Mothers Day Poetry Competition

Main Theme -
*A poem for your Mama* everyday is a mothers day so luff your mom everyday and make a poem for her and enter

Theme can also be related to these, due to reasons people might have
  • - Mother nature
  • - Watching a mother cat or dog or elephant or whatever that inspires
  • - What a mother should be
  • - Someone who's been like a mother to you (doesn't have to be a woman)


Rules:
  • Contestants may not vote for their own poem, no matter how good they think it is.
  • Please try to read the poems fully to give everyone a fair chance (this is not an actual rule, people should just take everybody into consideration).
  • Please don't automatically vote for a poem because you see it has the most votes.
  • Don't vote for a poem because you know it's your friend's poem (may lead to disqualification).
  • All kinds of poems are accepted.
  • You can enter with a poem or two
  • Don't post anything to insult the author (your vote will not count).
  • If you vote, leave a comment (possibly with reason, discussion, etc..).
  • Not everybody has perfect grammar, try to not let it affect your decision in voting.

Poems:

Poem 1

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Sometime the Mother Nature
Embrace me with it warmth
Casting away my fear and doubts
When each time i'm feeling lost
In this vast sea called world
And my cheeks are filled with
Burning tears

Toward me with her crimson eyes
Sometime is watching at each sunset
Praying for my sinful soul
Speaking words of comfort
Blinding believing in me
That in life I'll take the good way

Like a mother for her children
Which each rain she's showing sadness
With each storm rage
A smile with a playful rainbow
And when her children are sad
A warm hug from the sunlight's

But after so much love from her
Why do i feel this painful emptiness
In an end i'm just a lost child in the dark
In a world created to feel someone love
Even if i knew that all this is a bitter illusion

The Mother Nature which i loved
Never heard my words
Never felt the void I had in my soul
Today I'm just a falling star
Falling slowly in an endless darkness

Because I'm lost in a sweet fantasy
Thought that being loved by an invisible force
Slowly becoming a shadow while searching
A shelter to protect me from the storm
I created in my heart
Because all around me without her warm arms
Everything breaks apart


Poem 2

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She was the strongest warrior I’ve known
Faced all the pain and hurt all alone
Bleeding yet still fighting so bold and strong
And when things have gone wrong
She’s always the first to be my ally
To protect me from the raging storm;
A lighthouse of hope shining
Even in the darkest of nights
As a guide back to your harbor
She was the greatest embodiment
Of love, life, and soul...my Mamma


Poem 3

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So many years have past
In the blink of an eye
Being raised went fast
As you always stood by

From when i was young
Knowing so very little
Where you were i clung
Though eventually it whittled.

With your time and support
Preparing to be alone
One day i will set forth
Moving out of your home

For now I will learn your ways
Even if they are a pain
Instead of being lead astray
Until im ready i will remain


Poem 4

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Omma
You used to cradle me
And sing me a lullaby
Whenever I heard thunder
And saw the sky
Illuminated by lightning
You cradled me
And sang me a lullaby

I was afraid
And tears streamed down my face
You kissed them away
And sang me a lullaby
They were comforting words
Filled with love
Omma,
Only you could sing me
That lullaby

That was when I was little
And nothing has changed
I come today running
into your loving arms
And you still cradle me
And sing me that lullaby

“Hush little darling
Don’t you cry
Omma’s gonna make everything alright.
And if life doesn’t go your way
I’ll make it happen for you anyway.”

Omma – The greatest gift of my life
Was being born as your child.
Kamsamnida.


Poem 5

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why didn't I know how much I would miss you
until it was too late and you were gone
a fate that was too cruel, a live without you
first time I was too young to understand
but when time passes by I missed you

a mother who would be there for me
to talk or to cry in her warm embrace
but there wasn't anything like that for me
to lean me how to walk with grace
because of this lose I fail at most things

but I know that if I had the chance
I wouldn't leave my children
so they would loose the change to change
this world and start to hide or run
for that I would be scared

mine left me when I was an infant
but I found one who I think was great
not related by blood or an other bond


Poem 6

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She brought me to life, showed me the world
For her I'm far greater than rubies, diamonds & emerald
But why do I always end up making her suffer again and again
Instead of making her happy, I end up giving her pain

She took me in her arms and craddled me to sleep
For her, I am the prince of her keep
But why do I always end up making her cry
Making tears like pearls drop from her eye

She feeds me first staying hungry, for she's always welcoming never bleak
Teaching me how to walk holding her fingers and the way to speak
But why do I always end up using the sharpness of my tongue on her
Hurting her in the depths of her heart, like none other

I am the light of her eyes, her sun, her moon
For me she hums the lullaby tune
But why do I always end up hurting her, so far
Making her sad and on her heart leaving a scar

She loves me more than herself, always there for me fulfilling my needs
Like gardner she grew me up into a fine tree from a worthless seed
But why do I always end up making her feel blue
Yes Mom, I just wanna say sorry for everything and P.S I Love You.


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First :0
6 poems...
Will read some of it now
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I will await to see who gets your vote!!
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I was already done reading..(:
Was waiting for others to vote first
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I don't see a date saying when this ends I will read eventually but I like knowing how much time I have to do so
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Already voted. Chose 3rd entry...(:
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1 vote, thanks for voting zyxw ^.^
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four votes

there are all so nice
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