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Story Competition - August Edition
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Story 1
Spoiler

The Reluctant Escort


~ ~ ~

Two little girls, their black hair swinging in matching pigtails, sat on either side of a young man at the small round table in the old-fashioned restaurant. Fifties-style rock played in the background. With childish delight, the twins sipped contentedly from long straws dipped in their favorite nostalgic dessert: grape and orange soda pop, foaming over floating, creamy scoops of ice cream. Their sparkling eyes laughed at the man, as they dared him to taste.

“C’mon, Uncle Kyung, just one sip!” One six-year-old shoved her frosty glass under his chin.
“No, try mine first!” teased the other one, pushing forward her own treat.
“Do both!” his nieces giggled simultaneously.

Kyung stared down into the gloppy mess and grimaced. *I suppose I’ve faced worse…* Besides, surrender was really the only viable option in this case. “All right, I’ll try it – but just one sip!” He delicately maneuvered both straws to his lips and swallowed a tiny bit of the syrupy-sweet drink. His eyes traced the bright colors swirling through the white vanilla, and suddenly his mind took him back…

~ ~ ~

He stood at the crest of a windswept hill, overlooking the coast. Far off, orange and violet clouds billowed up, kissing their fractured reflections in the rippling ocean below. Behind him, his black shadow streamed out, widening until it melted into the growing night, while before him, Nature's colors melded and flowed.

Kyung, however, might as well have been blind to it all. Ignoring the gaudy kaleidoscope parading across the sky, his eyes followed instead a black splinter slicing through the water - a boat, escaping into the west. The energetic hum of its engines faded into the crashing surf, and the craft disappeared into the horizon, lost in the uncertain distinction between the atmosphere and the waves.

Suddenly, the bright colors dimmed, as the clouds darkened and the ocean turned grey, then black. The edges of his vision dissolved into blankness, and the images distorted and blurred. He tried to rub his eyes, but his arms wouldn't move. As his sight failed and he tried fruitlessly to lift his hands from his sides, something split open his skull, and he blacked out.

~ ~ ~

“Uncle Kyung? Hey, are you okay???”

Kyung blinked, and was once again back in the restaurant between his nieces. Their shining eyes looked up at him, clouded with concern. He forced a smile. “Oh – yeah, I’m fine… but I think these floats overloaded my brain! Here – you’d better finish them up yourselves.” He slid the drinks back in front of the girls and watched them empty the tall glasses. For the rest of their outing, until he’d delivered the girls safely through their mother’s front door, he remained cheerfully attentive, refusing to think about the trick his mind played on him.

After goodbye hugs from the twins, and a peck on the cheek from his grateful sister, he drove home, focused on traffic. He went through the motions of parking, letting himself into the small apartment, and shooting the deadbolt. Finally, he sank onto the slightly worn cushion of the futon on the opposite wall, and dropped his head into his hands.

It had been a while… weeks, maybe, since his last flashback. The doctor had warned that they might continue intermittently for months, even years, to come. Now that he was safely home, Kyung let his defenses down, and the memories flooded back. It had started over eight months ago…

~ ~ ~
Kyung's head hurt.

The fragments of his dream evaporated, until he recalled only the vague impression of a mellow, orange-and-purple sunset. He tried to rouse himself from the fog of sleep, but his mind felt clouded. In addition, his head was throbbing, and he felt faintly nauseous. Bright light warmed his eyelids, warning him not to open his eyes just yet, or he'd risk being half-blinded by the morning sun - and possibly triggering an even worse headache.

Instead of opening his eyes and jumping into his normal routine, he would indulge in a few extra moments of leisure. Then, as he slowly regained awareness, he remembered: it was Saturday! He could afford to let his body awaken slowly. His bed felt unusually delicious this morning, and he felt grateful for the weekend that stretched before him.

True, his new job was great. He loved living here in this little town on Europe's southwest coast, and working in the research library each day was perfect. Such a welcome change from his always-stressful lifestyle, in the big city back home. Unfortunately, however, not all of his co-workers found it so blissful. After about a month and a half there, Kyung had noticed some surprising tensions among the employees. He probably would have noticed it sooner, but still felt like an outsider around them. *Office politics,* he thought, *the same everywhere.* He shouldn't have been surprised to encounter the phenomenon in his new workplace. Still, it would be nice to get this break.

The bed felt so incredibly comfortable; he hated to get up. As far as he was concerned, there was no reason to get up early on a Saturday. After all, Monday morning would come soon enough. Perhaps he would have to call in sick; there might be a virus making the rounds. Jeannot had complained of stomach trouble yesterday afternoon. It had been so bad that the other young man had refused to join the others for their weekly evening of Friday bar-hopping.

Kyung suspected that Jeannot's absence had opened the way for his co-workers' invitation for him to come along last night. He would have to find a quiet way to thank the sickened man for giving him a chance to connect outside the office. Maybe he could pick up something from the market later today. He always enjoyed taking walks through the little town, buying fresh baguettes, and browsing in the tiny boutiques.

Either it was the thought of this, or it was the cool softness of the sheets caressing his limbs out of their sleepy indifference... At any rate, he finally decided that it was time to brave the unforgiving sunlight. *Sunglasses on the bureau across the room, can probably make it without opening my eyes.* Time to wake up. Kyung stretched luxuriously.

Or tried to.

Midway through the stretch, as he arched back into the cushy pillow supporting his head, his wrists were abruptly caught by something cold and hard. His hands could reach no further than the air above his shoulders. His eyes flew open.

Squinting against the glaring sun, Kyung raised his head and stared at the shining band of metal around his left wrist. A thin chain attached to the bracelet was anchored out of sight. Kyung tugged at the restraint tentatively, but it held fast. His head swiveled to the right, and he found that his other wrist was similarly cuffed.

Cuffed?? Adrenaline flooded his system, and he tried to sit up. Suddenly, however, his brain caught up to what his eyes had been telling him, and his body collapsed back onto the soft mattress. His black eyes wide, his heart pounding, he stared at the blurry, golden-and-fuchsia wall surrounding his bed.

*What the hell? *

A chill shivered across the pale skin on his bare chest, and his hands tightened reflexively, grabbing some of the bedcoverings. Silky, satiny... Kyung gazed down in shock at the lavender sheets and the embroidered, matching duvet.

*Hey! This isn't my bed! Where am I? What - what happened?*

He wished desperately for his eyeglasses. Could this be a practical joke? Maybe this was just a setup in his own bedroom. He hoped...

More forceful yanks on the chains securing his wrists produced no appreciable results. His feet - ! He swallowed hard. Were his feet chained too? Gently, he bent his knees, pulling his legs away from the foot of the bed. He sighed with relief to find them unfettered.

How could he get out of this? He thought about yelling for help... but - chained to a bed? Really? The young man wondered guiltily just how much he'd drunk last night...

Thinking back to the previous evening, he frowned slightly. They had left work and headed towards a little restaurant for a light supper. He had chatted with Emmanuelle about the differences he'd noticed in phone etiquette between America and France. But Kyung couldn't recall where they'd gone. He knew the after-work routine on a Friday was to dine at a restaurant, then pick up some gelatos and stop by a couple of bars. None of that rang a bell. In fact, he didn't even remember the end of his conversation with Emmanuelle.

He took a deep breath. He had to try to get free. Slowly, he leveraged himself into a sitting position. He was wearing soft, light-weight cotton pants, tied at the waist with some kind of sash.

*Oh, crap... I don't even own pants like this. Oh, God...*

He stifled his burgeoning panic and bent over to examine the metal restraints. Their fragile appearance reassured him. Surely he could break out of these. With a start, he realized that the strange wall surrounding his bed was actually a curtain, but his near-sightedness had kept him from noticing. Rather awkwardly, because his right arm's movements were restricted, he turned toward the left side of the bed and, knees bent to his chest, braced his heels against the wooden bed frame. He pulled his left arm into his chest, holding it tightly.

* Here's hoping the chain is as weak as it looks... *

He straightened his body firmly, pulling against the metal links harder and harder until the bracelet threatened to cut through the pale skin on his wrist. Kyung set his mouth against the pain, tightened the muscles in his arm, and pushed his feet harder against the wooden frame, trying to snap the chain. Something tickled his forearm from wrist to elbow. He wondered whether it was a bug, until crimson spots on the pastel sheets proved that the chain was stronger than his skin. He cursed at the sight of his own blood and strained even harder.

The wooden bed frame creaked, cracked, and suddenly gave way. His feet flew outwards. A heavy hook - still embedded in a bit of wood - flew upwards. It was still attached to the chain. The force of the chain releasing from its moorings propelled his torso backwards, and his head slammed into the solid, wooden wall behind him. His body collapsed onto his right arm, still angled uncomfortably behind him. Sharp pain lanced through his arm and fireworks danced in his vision. Part of the curtain around the bed collapsed, partially covering his face. Terror battled pain for a moment, and then they reached a compromise. Roaring filled his ears and his vision tunneled down to a pinpoint. Then he passed out.

~ ~ ~
Kyung drew a ragged breath as he pulled himself back into the present. Realizing that night had fallen without him realizing it, he got to his feet wearily and closed the blinds on the large window. He crossed the room to the kitchenette and opened the refrigerator without real interest. *You have to eat something healthy,* he reminded himself, parroting instructions he’d learned sometime in the last few months of therapy, and found a stick of string cheese and an apple, which he could eat quickly with nearly no cleanup. He leaned against the counter and peeled the plastic wrapper from the cheese, then added a strip of the soft white cheese to the crunchy bite of apple already between his teeth. He gazed at a round painting on the wall, not really seeing the brush strokes delineating a white sail against grey clouds and blue ocean. An apple with cheese… how very French, he thought, and he felt the memories returning…

~ ~ ~

This time when he awoke, the sun was not beating down on his eyelids. His headache, however, was worse. Kyung’s eyes opened instantly as he struggled to sit up. Suddenly, he realized that his arms were free; he lifted his hands and saw that the chains had been cut through. The gleaming bracelets remained intact, however, with a few links dangling from each. Although sore, his right arm appeared undamaged despite taking his body’s weight. His cut wrist, on the other hand, sported a wrapped, white bandage. Obviously, someone had come in while he was unconscious.

* Oh, fu…” His voice trailed off. Though a gap in the curtains, Kyung could see what looked like a door. He stood quickly, fighting off the dizziness, and took two steps towards escape.

“Perhaps you would like these,” a soft voice suggested in French-accented English.

Kyung whirled, assuming the defensive stance he’d learned in the classes his Korean parents had enrolled him in since he could walk. A man was sitting, long legs crossed at the knee, in an elaborately carved chair in the corner of the room. He held out something, but Kyung couldn’t see what it was, and the young man wasn’t about to let his guard down. The other man sighed, and stood up gracefully. He was tall - at least six foot two, Kyung guessed - and crossed the room in two strides.

Before Kyung could react, the man clasped one of the young man’s hands and pressed into it a hard, rather delicate-feeling object, then retreated back to the chair. The young man’s sense of touch grasped reality before his sense of sight, and he abruptly realized that he now held his glasses. He swiftly slid them onto his face and got a quick look around the room before focusing again on the tall man.

Despite the flamboyantly decorated bed and ornate chair, the rest of the room was painted a plain white, and the other furnishings – a wooden table, short bookshelf, and cabinet – had simple, minimalist designs. In fact, the room seemed fairly unremarkable, except for the two small, round windows to the right of the door.

“What the hell is going on? Where am I? Who are you?” Kyung fired off the questions one after another. The man, a mane of fiery red hair framing his angular face, stared back at Kyung, tilting his head and narrowing his eyes quizzically.

“You are in the place on which we agreed last night… and I’m the one whom we agreed would be in charge.” Kyung’s brows furrowed in confusion at this non-sensical answer, while the other man continued. “Are you adding a new twist to our scenario, or are you actually having second thoughts?”

“So,” Kyung glared at the seated man, “you’re not giving me a straight answer, then? Fine - I can find my own way out. Just leave me alone!” Still feeling dizzy, he backed up towards the door and reached behind him to find the latch. The red-head watched him calmly, a slight smile playing about his thin lips. Kyung lost his balance for a moment, and his hand bumped a lamp sitting on the bookshelf beside him. He reacted quickly, expecting it to tip over. Even as he moved, however, he realized that the lamp hadn’t budged – it was apparently bolted down. Kyung glanced wildly at the man who was still seated in the chair, and then jerked the door open and ran from the room.

He was immediately outdoors, wind ruffling his black hair, his bare feet slapping on a wooden floor. A white railing stretched across the space in front of him, so he turned right and began to race alongside the building he’d just escaped. Then he looked back to his left, taking in the view he hadn’t really noticed the moment he’d gotten out of the door. His steps slowed, then stopped. White-faced, he staggered to the railing, grabbing the waist-high metal bar with both hands. Eyes wide, mouth agape, he stared in disbelief. An endless expanse of rippling waves surrounded him – him, and the boat on which he now found himself.

Two tanned hands grasped the railing on either side of his own, and a crisp shirt pressed into the bare skin on his back. “I think we may have a problem here,” a soft, accented voice breathed into his ear.



Story 2

Spoiler
Ivory prison




Katelijne walked trough a white room filled with carpets on the floor and the walls, she was dressed in robes of red and orange silk embroidered with golden threads and emerald beats. To show of the wealth of her father the emperor. Angry she kicked one of the big cushions that was laying a cross the huge room. “what to show of my beautiful dress to show my fathers wealth. I am not even allowed to leave this room during the day. A ivory tower filled with false freedom”

the girl walked towards the balcony. In this high tower the only plus of this room, was she cold she all the lights of the stars that were shining that night, and the bright white moon that gave off his light tonight as well. More to herself than to the moon she wished “I with there was a way to escape this golden cage, it is not that I don't have everything that I want except my freedom to walk trough the city like every normal girl can do. I know there is a lot more that I can do than die out of boredom in this gigantic ivory palace with gardens that are kept.”

The Katelijne sighed again, she was ready to go back inside, with one last gaze into the distant night. She turned around and started to walk, but Katelijne remembered that there wasn't a big animal that could fly like that, she walked back to the balustrade to take a close look at the animal that came closer. It was a giant white snake, on it sat a hooded person. That was all she could she, the snake stopped next to the balustrade the hooded person jumped over it onto the balcony.

“Who are you, I will call the guards”

“Will you really do that?”

The voice that came from the under the hood was that of a woman not much older that her, Katelijne thought.

“What do you want of me?”

“I want nothing of you, at least not me. But you wanted something from me, you wished to the moon the be freed from this prison you are living in.”

“Yes are you here to take me away?”

“No I am not. But I came here to tell you about someone who might be able to do it”

“aren't you able?”

“I would be able, but I can't. The wheel of destiny is already set in motion the moment you uttered that wish of yours”

“Who will safe me?”

“I don't know for sure, the only certainty is that the person will be someone from my home village”

“Why don't you know? Have you lost contact with that place?”

“Of course not, my parents rule that place and every year they send a wolf with news, and aren't you just acting like a spoiled little rich kid"

“I am a 13 year old princess, who has been taught a lot more than common girls”
“True, most girls your age are already betrothed in the most noble class or even in the rich common families, and are spending time by their soon to be families”

“See, but my father thinks not only that I am too young for having a fiancee but also to travel to a neighboring kingdom to look at their customs, can you take me to a kingdom who has a prince my age or a bit older?”

“I can not do that, I agree with your father on this you are too young and you need to learn a few more lessons here in this kingdom”

Katelijne walked towards the hooded stranger and took him by the shoulders, the hood of his cape fell down and showed, a fair woman in her thirties with raven black long hair that fell over her back until it reached her hips, and eyes that were or the rare dark cobalt blue. Katelijne was stunned, that a woman her age would travel alone on a mythical snake

“Are you a goddess?”

The fair lady laughed very softly “No, I am not though I am descended from one, my mother is a goddess that can sing almost every plant to bloom. She and my father raised me different than most children of the gods, that is a story I will tell you in the future”

“than why can't you take me with you?

“no you are to young to take the journey, we chose to let the children reach adulthood first, their 20th birthday. We send them out to walk this planet. So wait until you reach that age, someone will come”

with these words of courage the black haired beauty jumped onto her snake and flew into the night. Katelijne shouted at her “That is not fair, why do I need to wait for 7 years?”

The only answer she got was a waving hand, Katelijne kicked again this time against the balustrade of her balcony, the frustration turned into pain since the stone fence didn't move an inch and her slippers weren't safe enough for kicking stone fences, with a pained filled scream of frustration hurried back into the room.


The years went very, very slow by as a slug would be able to slide trough the desert before being mummified or even vanished because of the dryness. With the years she started to hate “her parents even more, since with each year the restrictions became more. Not only did she need to use a veil when going into the garden but also going outside of her room was one mandatory. In the beginning she was allowed to listen when justice was spoken or the counsel had a meeting. Now she only could stay in her room, the reason why? Because she had spoken her mind to her father and king ones, when a commoner did a crime of self defense against a nobleman. The judge convicted the commoner to death, which was too severe punishment for such a case. While the sentence was spoken Katelijne walked towards the judge and asked with a loud voice “Why is this man convicted? Because a accident happened with him and a nobleman. Is that a reason to sentence him to death? A retribution must be done, but death is too much. When this happened with a noble being the course they only need to pay a blood price to the family. But this commoner is the blood price his death? If he can't pay the price, then prison or working for the family for seven years should have been sufficient.”

SILENCE, you don't even know how the world around you works, even though you are a princess you will be moved from this place, until you have learned how to listen to the judgment of a person who is older and wiser but also has studied to be a judge.?

“But......."

“Don't even think about to object to this, you will now leave this room, GUARDS”

the guards took her by the arm and forced her to leave the room,

“It is nothing much, a lot of people thought that you were right in this case, but we can't object to this, now please princess go back to your room”

“But this is wrong, a country shouldn't be ruled like this”

“We know that, but the common people can't complain only royalty and noble class civilians can do that and those nobles like this system”

“Yes, keep people stupid and they don't dare to object, the perfect system for tyrants and gods. It is that I learned a lot without my fathers knowledge when he find out, I surely be punished for what I did in the court room. When that happens can you bring me a few books from the Library”

“You mean the Library Of Old?”

“Yes, since there are things written in those books, that told about not only woman with power, but also 'low class' citizen could become part of all the counsel if they had studied enough about the law of the land. That changed 500 centuries ago, haven't found a out why”

“We will bring you those books, but what if they find out that we did that and get punished?”

“I will take your punishment”

“you would do that for us princess?Why?”

“My caged live has than a meaning, until 3 years ago I only thought about myself and the question why I have it so bad in this castle. A meeting with a strange black woman riding a giant snake trough the sky changed my point of view”

“Than so be it, we will help you until you are send away”

The next morning Katelijne was ordered to come to the throne room, she knew why she was summoned. Normally she wouldn't take a lot of time to dress herself properly, this time it was different, she ordered her maid to take out the most expensive dress she owned and do her hair with more effort on top of that she gave her some hair ornaments of pure white and yellow gold. It took her 3 hours to get ready fr the summoning of her father.

With grace she almost flew trough the throne room until she reached her king's throne, the king that was sitting on it was a elderly man in his fifties, though he was still good looking the fear for betrayal and the many scars from them, started to show deep lines on his brow and his eyes that once had gentleness in them were hardened.

“I have come, my king as you commanded me” Katelijne bowed down but kept her back straight, it seemed like a curtsy, but Katelijne didn't want to show her father that much of humbleness, she thought it wasn't fair to others. After the bowing she looked her father straight in the eyes.

You dare to face me like that? Where are the manners I and your mother thought you? Start by kneeling down before your king

“I will not do that father, I will listen you like this since you are just going to preach about what I did wrong in the court room, on top of that I am hear to get punished for that”

Katelijne heard the people after the grasp for air. They knew for sure that she would be send to prison or even to the guillotine , some even hoped that she would be given to the gods.

Katelijne followed to the people behind her “I know what everyone is thinking and it wouldn't be that bad to have a quick death, since my life here has always been a prison filled with luxurious things, I would like the go to a normal prison for once to see how it is like there”

Katelijne saw the kings eyes turn into fire and knew that what she said was wrong.

Daughter, you not only complained in court that my ruling was wrong, you also dared to say it right to my face. If someone other than you would have said this to me they would have been hanged, for my daughter I would be compassionate at use the guillotine to make your dead a little bit painless. To my regret you are born under star of Lucrano and it is said that those who also has the sign of Sphinx will be chosen to be leaders and are forbidden to be killed, most of those children are born into houses of royalty or at least nobility

“Father is that the reason why you lock me up in my room so I can't learn what is outside of these castle walls?”

It is not your time yet and I pray it will never be your time, because your ideas are those of a revolution and war

“They are not my father, they are thoughts of freedom and training the mind”

That is why your sentence for disobeying my ruling will be worst thing you have ever imagined.

You will be sentenced to stay in your room, all your books will be taken away from you, the only thing than can stay in your room are the dresses and ornaments, no pen or paper. Bars will be placed before the windows so you can only look outside but never go there. Your meal will be bread and water for the breakfast and lunch and some yogurt with honey for dinner, once every week you will get a piece of meat with your bread. Before your door will be standing guards who will not allow any visitors. And they are also not allowed to have contact with you.”

“Father instead of meat once a week can you allow them to give me fresh fruit every evening. I mean the seasonal fruits?”

“You don't want meat once a week, but instead fruit every week day?”

“Yes, if that is possible”

“Then I allow it. But your sentence will be that you can not leave that room until the day I will die, now leave my sight”

“So be it father, than you will not see my face again, good bye”


With her head high Katelijne walked out of the throne room, she heard the whispering people that kept their hands before their mouths so the rest wouldn't hear everything. Some words were heard by the young princess. Katelijne ignored those foolish words said by those adults, they didn't know what was really important in this world, for sure it wasn't their wealth or influence nor it was their rich family history or their noble blood. Those were just their mindless thoughts. When passing the guards she talked to the other day, they both nodded, to let her know that both of them remembered their promise to her.


And so started Katelijne prison live within her fathers castle, the next morning her father had ordered almost all the guards to take away all her books not a single one she was allowed to keep. “Can't I keep this one? It is about this country's religion”
“His highness, the king said no book is allowed. This is a book so it is not allowed”

“Haven't you learned to think for yourself? This book has nothing to do with ruling the kingdom or law. Mostly there are stories in it about gods and goddesses who ruled this planet long ago. Every person has his own book”

“For now on you doing, Is everyone finished so we can leave this place?”

With all her beloved books in their arms the palace guards left her room.

“Please, don't burn them. Give them to the Library or a school, but please don't burn them”
The guards didn't show if they had heard Katelijne's plea to not harm those books.
They kept walking towards the exit, one of the guards looked around with some compassion in his eyes. But he wasn't allowed to speak to him he was just a simple commoner that had become a soldier, he was the youngest son of a farmer and he wanted to make a name for himself but found out that the country's guard wasn't what it had seemed.

The next morning the princess found out she had a different book of the history of the gods. When looking in it she saw the writing on the cover page 'given to Floris to remember his 18th birthday'
maybe he was the guard that looked back for a brief moment the only one of the guards that showed compassion to her when her books were taken.


He with the other 2 guards kept given books to her that she hadn't read before. It seemed that started with the first book on the Library's list every time they had guard duty before her door, they gave her 3 books to read. Katelijne made a box next to the door were they could hide the books in. Katelijne would put the books in that box that she finished reading. It was a great system since only her maids would come occasionally to give her some new dresses to wear. But other than that they were forbidden to enter the room, or even talk to Katelijne.

In the beginning Katelijne cursed her father for doing this to her but when years passed she became a lot milder towards her father and the rest of the nobles.
Maybe it was the knowledge that one day she would be free and roam the planet and leave not only the Ivory tower but also the country that would be than ruled by one of her brothers or even someone else from the noble clan. She was just glad that their were a lot of books in the Library.

In the last book she read at the end there was a note in. this is the very last book you needed to read from the Library. Now that it is finished you have read all the books that were present there. We are going to look for some other place to get the books. In these past 4 years there have been a lot of guards that took your side in this dispute, and risk a lot to give you the books you desired. The king has grown old . The years after your imprisonment , has been hard for him.

maybe in a few weeks we can liberate you from your Ivory prison.

Though we weren't able to locate the black in lady riding on a white snake you mentioned.


That evening a handsome man dresses in emerald and gold came to her balcony.
“it is the eve of your 20th birthday, I am here to take you on a journey, my mother said you would be willing to come with me”


Story 3

Spoiler
Dreamer Yoake


Yoake a girl of the orient world of her own making as she is a dreamer of love, dreamer of heart, a dreamer of adventure, and dreamer of everything.

This story is of Yoake on her way to Japan from her country what she says to other Not-a-China though with her white lie nature not many could believe her. In a Jet from the country this is where the story begins.

Yoake said she never dreamt this that she went on a journey within this journey on the jet she was riding in. You see in the sky soaring along the clouds became dark and the ominous, the air was staler and then turbulence began.

Yoake couldn't stand the bouncing up and down so she had to go wash her face, so she went to the restroom, she opened the door and poof. She was in the land of Monuments. Yes Monuments, statues, temples, pyramids, and the world wonders was all around her. She was on the Great wall , See saw this and started to choke, cause she didn't want to be on this, then she noticed it looked brand new in places on where no one could walk nowadays.

choking she spit up stuff, but out came a talking spittle shape like a heart with feet, but green in color. "Woah! Yoake You can stop now" that thing said. She heard that and started to choke again even worst."cough! cough! Cough!" "no more of us is down there, so please stop trying to get more out of you"that thing explained.

"K" Yoake Suddenly stopped. "Now my name is Sal"The green Sal told her."now why are you here?" Yoake asked uniquely shaking some. "I'm here to give you all the wishes you want, but only 3 you cannot keep" Sal explained."Cannot keep, that is ridiculous, wishes should be able to keep them all, your a crazy booger"Yoake acclaimed. "Don't call me that! My brother is really disgusting!" Sal explained. Yoake in her mind was thinking to herself your no cutey yourself either/"

"What is your wish?"Asked Sal."Wish, ah Wish, I wonder what it could be since I wont be able to keep three...I wish, well I'm not wishing anything, I'm leaving!"Yoake told Sal than poof! The next thng she new she was on top of the Eiffel tower in this oDD world.

"We bien; senorita!" Sal told her." "We," then poof. She was on top of the colloseum "Hey'Matee" sal replied"ha ha, that Australia, not Italian, you rotten meatball what a colossal mistake !"Yoake derived. "poof" she ended on top of a crazy contraption with puffing, poofing and pittering, pattering. "Well Howdy! mis hick!"Sal charming out in backwoods style language. "well hick, you got that 'hick" right, this moon"hick"shine machine, Hick" is right" Yoake drunkard like explained drinking white lightning feeling woozy. then poof!

The next thing she knew she was awaking on the jet as it was landing, but her eyes was sore and bloodshot for some reason. Then she realized that dream must be real for my eyes shouldn't feel this way. "poof" Sal appeared"why aren't you wishing anything?!" asked Sal panicking wildly. "Why? there is no need to wish for stuff I don't need." Yoake responded then rubbed her eyes.

"Wish me to be rich"the passenger asked beside her. "you can see that thing?"Yoekete asked Wonderingly. "Yes, that booger is right there."the passenger said. Then everyone on board started heckling out there wishes."I'm not giving in to your magic of suggestion "Yoake relented.

Sal Shook his head and waited patiently in this noisy cabin, then the pilot announced "prepare for landing and buckle all your seats, stay quiet and Yoake wish me a wife" "Geez, your magic is not right here, okay I will wish, but you need to wait till i get off the Jet" explained Yoake.

The Jet became quietly except for snapping seat belts and beaming light saying " buckle seat belts". Then the nose lifted up a little and the hum of the engine. The tires came down upon the airstrip concrete, the landing was smooth. The jet stopped and the pilot announced "please, exit to the door on the left and Yoake did you wish what I asked you?" "No!"she yelled in."Darn!" the pilot whispered not knowing the microphone was still on.

"Yoake got off the airplane and there was a guy who looked like from her country that looked liked her boyfriend she had in the past,. He was standing in his oriental cloak, Yoake figured it out, but she tricked sal, by going up and about to hug him, then she sprinted into the airport check out facility. She ent through everything and past then went out threw the front door.

"Taxi?!" Yoake yelled out to the cab. "She got in, then "poof!"Sal appeared. "Konichiwa!" "Baka! I'm still on flight."yoake responded. "No your not!"Sal Slashed out. "I'm moving aren't I." asked smartingly Yoake. "Yes, Then I'm still on flight, I'm going on a flight to the nearest park" She said with the cabby overhearing.

The car went three blocks which was at least 10 miles to a park where bunch of kids were playing."Arigatou!" She said then paid the 5000 yen. She got out and walked to the nearest bench as close to the playground as much as possible cause of being a stranger. "Okay! your going to make your wishes?"Asked Sal."Well, maybe after I can rest a few minutes cause of the jet lag," Yoake responded panting some. "Kay you have 10 minutes"Sal told her Sternly.

10 minutes past with Sal waiting in the sun patiently. "Well your wishes please?" "Okay, my first wish is I wish I never met you" Yoake wished. "Granted. "Next wish?"Sal asked knowing that this wish he could throw away. "hm next wish is I wish I never Choked you out of me."Yoake Wished. "Again Granted<" Said Sal knowing the wish could be thrown out again. "Next wish please, sorry to rush you but it is getting really hot here."Sal said with explanation."My third wish is, well leave me think, hm ....My Wish is that you were still inside of me."Yoake wished again."granted." Sal granted and threw the 3 wishes out knowing she could put him inside of her and was relieved, but it was getting hot on him.

"next wish please,"Sal asked quickly."what your hurry, mister let me think a little more give me five minutes okay." asked Yoake."Ka five minutes, but no more."Sal relently said giving in to her request.

"five minutes up, tell me your wish?"Sal asked fast. "kay, my next wish is...I wish you had no magic." Yoake wished."granted!" Sal quickly said without acknowledging what she said at first, but it was to late.

"You Tricked me, You fool Why You could of had all the wishes in the world?" Sal Responded in distraught. "I don't need anything but myself, I don't need riches cause it is to much for my age, I don't need anything that would hurt my heart like fake love that you would of tricked me in granting false love, falsehood and false everything.

"You need me!"Sal responded right before he dried out. "you want it, go ahead take it!"Yoake told a little boy. "Gulp"



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only 3 this time, hm? some reluctant voters should be happy
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ya they should
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LOL Green Boogers

Just finished reading all; very enjoyable.

It never ceases to amaze me how people can keep creating different stories. Even though ideas or images may be the same, the perspective of each author is different; the words they choose, the voice they speak with, all contribute to a one-of-a-kind story. Same with art, music, film, and so on.

Hmm not sure why I felt the need to share that particular nugget of wisdom. Maybe b/c I think that, once again, I will have trouble choosing which story to vote for.
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very odd stories ,must think about this
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*subscribes*
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very odd stories ,must think about this
This ^ is why you should enter in September.
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Zonie have heard romurs that he doesn't want to enter in a contest next month
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Well... I have felt that way myself... Maybe in October then?
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he entered short story

after ward he said never again i am writing a story
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