Poem Central

[saratobi_uzumaki]

I know this has been tried before and it failed, but I want to make a poetry thread that DOESN'T flop.....or at least not right away. So if you have any poems post 'em here. If you want help with a poem post here and ask for help. And guys.....don't be mean and say it sucks or something. Just tell them what they need to fix. So to get this started here's one of mine.

Never Stoppin'

I wanna be a superstar
I wanna go real far
I wanna get the girl
I wanna change the world!
It don't matter if, things are broken
It don't matter if, things aren't workin'
Nothing's holding you
Never stoppin', never stoppin', never stoppin' now!

I wanna be the best
I wanna beat the rest
I wanna break the mold
I wanna take the gold!
Don't listen to the people mockin'
It don't matter as long you be rockin'
Nothing's holding you
Never stoppin', never stoppin', never stoppin' now!

I am who I am
I ain't you, him, or that guy Sam
So if you don't like it,
then you can suck it!
Nothing's holding you
Never stoppin', never stoppin', never stoppin',
Never stoppin', never stoppin',
STOP!

[haseo_kun]

threse already a thread like this

[saratobi_uzumaki]

Didn't I say that in the first post? Though people stopped posting in it and it died.