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Ok heres my next story sorry its a week late but didn't like the one I wrote last week. This one is a bit less raw than usual but as always needs work. I hope you enjoy it

When I was young I was asked to do a paper on the morality of Euthanasia, at the time I naively saw it as a sign of personal weakness to resort to suicide. Just the thought of not fighting to the bitter end appalled me. I had been brought up admiring the final stands of histories heroes. How the Spartans fought...

Ok this is a different type of story. This one is also still raw and needs work as well sorry.

WARNING this one is quite dark and has sone disturbing content.

PART 1

ECHO


The white hum of the florescent lights always hurt his eyes. Eric always felt as if he was blind when he was around them. The light radiating all around him, small blinding rays of flickering light slowly pulsing their way into the back of his head, distorting...

Ok its finished and reasonably edited, of course there are my customary grammatical mistakes. This is a bit longer than the prologue. But Enjoy, and if you read this please tell me what you think, what did you like or dislike about it.

So without further wait. Here it is

Also if you haven't read the previous part here is the link to the prologue
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Chapter 1 Part 1

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As a result of the amount of people who requested to read this I decided I will just blog this fantasy story I'm writing. The story is based on the Forgotten Realms series of books as they take submissions form any author. I will post each chapter as I finish it

Enjoy

Prologue Part 1

The ground crunched softly beneath the exquisite black leather boots, as the light beat down upon the back of his neck. The handsome elf was attired in a Black vest and...