Leiv

I walked along the darkened hall, listening to the cracks along the wall.
And upon the paned glass windows, the rain splashed like tears of widows.
And from this chaotic symphony of violent sound, the ghosts and ghouls seeped unbound.
With shadows from starless darkened night, the moonlight fled absorbed in fright.

The ghouls they slovenly creped, up to my door which began to creek
and against my will I made a peep, and that innocent glance caused a shriek:...

Midnights coldness, belied its boldness
As the shadows fade away
The creaks and groans prelude stuffled moans
Today, at that house upon the hill

And the darkness drips upon their lips
As the wind begins to growl
Mirth does end, around that bend
Howls, at that haunting house upon the hill

And the yard is broken as the storm does not token
Life with its decree
And so the tangled trees do bend upon the sea
...

Our Father, which art in heaven,
hallowed be thy name;
thy kingdom come;
thy will be done,
in earth as it is in heaven.

...

Less We Forget the Sun
I gaze up into the whirl-wind beauty of the night;
the shadowy wraiths of clouds blending shades of black,
the glistening stars of this cold night twinkle back,
to my eyes, who wonder and dazzle in their delight.
Though the stars were bequest of glistening light
and this wondrous night has all the elegance of an aristocrat,
the comfort of the sun was missing and so on the grass I sat
With this mysterious soothing...

Hey all I did a heavy revision of one of the previose stories that I have posted here. It is a lot cleaner, and I feel overal better some aspects have been cleared up and others have been removed or made more dramtic. The story also gained about two pages from all the editions. Well I hope everyone who reads it will enjoy and be sure to leave a comment telling me what they think.

Part 1

Daniel yearned for the biting feel of the chilled autumn wind upon his cheeks as...