yes, i used a single word, like, a lot. so tell me which ones to take out. also i believe it's toooooooo long for a story contest so i was thinking about taking out Dorian and Cerulyn's part because it isn't really necessarily needed. But i thought it was cute a cute moment so i wrote it.
this part of the story might confuse you a bit becauuuussseee, it's taking place after the first book
so i kind of just spoiled a lot of it in here, but it's ok caz things might not end how i originally had them
welps. uh... *awkward laugh* once again, i haven't put any editing to it myself so tell me what i need and what i don't need, what makes sense, what doesn't, and all that good stuff, yes?
*sighs* hello there! <3
I just tried to pm you something to edit, but it's toooooo~ long. *sad face*
so it looks like it's not going to work out. thanks for offering anyway!
*sends you a friend request*