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Fireflyy · 07-02-2012

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zyxw · 07-02-2012

i see (:

Fireflyy · 07-02-2012

12 votes so far ^.^

ClyDeft · 07-02-2012

nice entries... I voted the 3rd, cause I felt it was the best poetically.....
Some had realy touching text/story though... so good job on all.... ^^

Fireflyy · 07-02-2012

15 votes . Thanks Zonie <3

ZonieCatz · 07-02-2012

You're quite welcome LOL
Now back to (actual) work XP

zyxw · 07-03-2012

aDvertise

ZonieCatz · 07-03-2012

Hmm... these poems are quite different from one another; it's hard to choose. They go through a whole range of emotions. Some rhyme, some don't. Some are about moms who are gone, some are about moms still in the speaker's life.

I like the approach of #1 to the topic of Mother. It has nice personification (smile/rainbow; crimson eyes/sunset; rage/storm). I found it interesting that Mother Nature could be just as disappointing a maternal figure as a human mom might be. The poem starts sad (fear/doubt/lost/tears), builds up a (false) hopeful feeling in the next 2 verses, then everything falls apart. This was sad but well done. Gets my vote ^^

A few other comments:

Spoiler

Great work, "arigato minna"!

Dany1908 · 07-03-2012

17 votes

thurnwenthil · 07-03-2012

yeah only 17 votes.
need some more advi's

View Poll Results: Which Poem you'd vote for?
Poem 1	6	25.00%
Poem 2	2	8.33%
Poem 3	3	12.50%
Poem 4	1	4.17%
Poem 5	8	33.33%
Poem 6	4	16.67%
Voters: 24. You may not vote on this poll

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Fireflyy Lost Kat </3 Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: I am lost </3 Posts: 43,100 Blog Entries: 51	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition This thread Kat's Thread __________________ Stuck in a love triangle, one makes me forget the whole world and the other doesn't let me sleep. ∆ Lost forever </3

07-02-2012	#72 (permalink)
zyxw Ultimate Hokage Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 4,529	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition i see (: __________________ courtesy of Itzdesire M♀A♀D

07-02-2012	#73 (permalink)
Fireflyy Lost Kat </3 Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: I am lost </3 Posts: 43,100 Blog Entries: 51	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition 12 votes so far ^.^ __________________ Stuck in a love triangle, one makes me forget the whole world and the other doesn't let me sleep. ∆ Lost forever </3

07-02-2012	#74 (permalink)
ClyDeft Psp Fan Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: DachiLand ^^ Posts: 9,001 Posts: 6,659 Blog Entries: 1	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition nice entries... I voted the 3rd, cause I felt it was the best poetically..... Some had realy touching text/story though... so good job on all.... ^^ __________________ My Showcase! ~ Set by Me ~ Winner SotW 101, 104 , 122 & 147 Co-Winner Sotw 103 & 113! Winner VSotF 7, 11 & 12!

07-02-2012	#75 (permalink)
Fireflyy Lost Kat </3 Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: I am lost </3 Posts: 43,100 Blog Entries: 51	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition 15 votes . Thanks Zonie <3 __________________ Stuck in a love triangle, one makes me forget the whole world and the other doesn't let me sleep. ∆ Lost forever </3

07-02-2012	#76 (permalink)
ZonieCatz Ultimate Hokage Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: They won't tell me <.< Posts: 3,706 Blog Entries: 29	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition You're quite welcome LOL Now back to (actual) work XP __________________ AC Story Winner Feb, Mar, June (tied), Aug, Nov & Dec 2012 * My Stories Here Vote in / Enter AC Library Contests Sig- Dany1908

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07-03-2012	#78 (permalink)
ZonieCatz Ultimate Hokage Join Date: Nov 2011 Location: They won't tell me <.< Posts: 3,706 Blog Entries: 29	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition Hmm... these poems are quite different from one another; it's hard to choose. They go through a whole range of emotions. Some rhyme, some don't. Some are about moms who are gone, some are about moms still in the speaker's life. I like the approach of #1 to the topic of Mother. It has nice personification (smile/rainbow; crimson eyes/sunset; rage/storm). I found it interesting that Mother Nature could be just as disappointing a maternal figure as a human mom might be. The poem starts sad (fear/doubt/lost/tears), builds up a (false) hopeful feeling in the next 2 verses, then everything falls apart. This was sad but well done. Gets my vote ^^ A few other comments: Spoiler (sorry don't have comments on all, don't mind me can't think anymore 2nite) #2 says a lot in a short space; it has a wistful, sad feeling. #4 would probably make the poet's mom cry (in a good way LOL) if she got it as a gift ^^ #6 sounds like a classic teenager's struggle, I can see my kid going thru this roller-coaster with me, nowadays. Great work, "arigato minna"!

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07-03-2012	#80 (permalink)
thurnwenthil TamaRisk Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: In A Garden Which I Call My Home Posts: 16,591 Blog Entries: 259	Re: Mothers Day Poetry Competition yeah only 17 votes. need some more advi's __________________ Set made by the wonderful Dany-chan Warrior Tribe (ongoing novel) Crimson Tattoo (ongoing novel) The Unspoken Files Of Cassandra Aslan

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