Poetry Contest # 4

[Dany1908]

Ok will be a bit of delay ..someone needs to send the poem and maybe more will enter .Sice then enjoy reading and choose one for voting
Later i will make the poll

Rules:are important

1.Those which enter will PM me the poems

2.The poem to be ours not from net

3.I will post the poems few minute before the contest will start ...and then the poll will be made

4.They will be post in the thread like

Poem #1
Poem #2
Poem #3...etc

5.All AC members can vote the poem they like

6. We don't put the name of the user to not influence the voting (i notice on other forums that if Xis friend with Y the vote is going between friends )

7. Not vote your own poem

8.Everyone which will vote from now on to write the poem number 2

9.At the end of the contest it will be said the name of the members which entered in the contest near the poems

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Poem 1

This is it, our words, our promise.
We made the vow of here and now.
To live our lives and martyr our hearts
For the sake of tomorrow; before it starts
To consume, devour, unhinge,
To control us, so before it begins;
Destroy your heart and take your wings.

Poem 2


Here he send me 2 poems i could not choose so i put both...will be like 2 poems in one

thoughts from a fallen mind

two forces collide
a spark ignites
a sullen angel falls
he can no longer take flight
Blinded by his pain
subdued by his shame
no one in the world
could enter his brain
his wings cast off
his halo broken and bent
he's become tired of life
his soul burnt out and spent
he's no longer and angel
but a man with no means
he's no longer an angel
he no longer dreams


burnt wax

I've lost so much
with nothing gained
all thats left
my insanity and pain
i've hoped for clarity
and strived for thought
only to find
that its all for naught
way too much thinking
percieved so many views
i've given up on happiness
though i thought it was due
so i've stopped caring
lost all my concern
i've put out the candles
they'll no longer burn


Poem 3

Broken

Husshhh,my sweet baby,don't want you to cry
Your tears are like acid,my wings will not fly
The blood that's around you is not worth the pain
The stains of your sins will so fast wash away !

I'm right here,don't worry , always by your side ,
You're smiling now , but you're still holding the knife ...
I'm sorry I've hurt you,I won't anymore ,
My chains are so heavy,oh please keep me warm !

No! Why are you leaving with that pile of flesh ? Don't throw it in silence , don't leave me a mess !
Please stay here,I can't breathe,what did I do wrong?
Oh come back my killer ,torment me again ,
You are my dear princess,I am your poor man !

Outside they are screaming,what should I do now ?

The bright light is calling,I don't want to go !

What is that ? It's broken , poor mirror on the wall
You telling the story on backwards for so long !

-Come out now, your hands up !
And put down your knife !
Leave her corpse alone and come freely with us !

I must leave,my baby , so sorry for this !
You'll always be right here , my heart is all yours ,
So long,rest in peace now,I'm saying goodbye ,
I'm always your prince and you are my dear girl !

Poem 4

Autumn evening

Once upon a time a broken heart,
In a silent autumn evening,
Saw a rainbow in his eyes.
She fell in love with those two beads,
Which were sparkling in the sunset.
They were a requiem of her lost love,
From a long forgotten past of suffering.
She opened her heart like a music box,
And the sky became a battlefield
Between the stars above those two.
And now the heart starts to bleed again.
She waits in the garden filled with roses,
Where they first met on an autumn evening.
But the rain that falls upon her skin now,
Washes away every touch and scent of him.
In that autumn evening she gave her heart,
But in return she got only chaos and pain,
And in the end the rainbow faded away,
With a hundred blades which pierced her soul.
In an endless autumn evening...
A song of sorrow from a broken music box.
Could be heard ...

Poem 5

"Beloved"
Night is still
Unlike they told me
I finally fell in love
Love indeed
See what I see
Love me for me
See what I see?
Pretend to see me
Have mercy upon me
Say you love me
It suffocates me

Poem 6

Rainman

Droplets appear they have no colour when they fall from the sky its a bit fair duller
The sky is gray clouds appear rain is coming i feel it’s near
i feel a wet drop against my face it makes me think of our special place
a place in the clouds away from the clutter a place with you so my heart can flutter

i wish i was a bird floating being in the clouds always gloating
looking down at the fools below seeing the sun rise feeling it’s glow
rain follows me i can make it appear
a wave of my wand and it will be near
droplets of water osmosis occurs diffusion across a membrane
yes that was technical but yes it was true thats what really happening in you
tiny reactions of utmost importance

tiny reactions happen with you reactions to the things that you say and do
when you touch my hand when you look in my eyes
it sets my heart on fire im telling no lies
im the rainman thats what i will be
i will be a rainman until your here with me
rainman forever if thats what it takes rainman for you cause i know the stakes

[Dany1908]

Sorry for the double post
i voted 6

[Yuukee]

Esshh i was too late for entry >_<
Aniway my vote is for Poem 6 =D
becoz Its rain =D

[jsquared130]

voted for #6. really good stuff.

[naitsirk0]

I voted 5, simple, sweet.

i like poem 4 its fab

I voted for 6 cuz everybody knows rain is my thing

[Kamisori]

I voted for poem 5, because it rules. :O

[Dany1908]

thanks to all which voted since now
11 votes
need more

[Irongiulio]

#1 : D