Poetry Competition August Edition - Voting

[Dany1908]

Ok for mods don't move this
1. I always do it in this section
2. I have no idea were should i made in the first place

-----------------------

Contest Ends 10 August

The magic words were :

Theme 1

Flame, Gaze, Deep, Dew, Green, Witness''

Theme 2

Demon, Velvet, Stone, Withered, Whisper, Curse



Rules


1. Contestants may not vote for there own poem no matter how good they think it is
2.Please try read the poems fully to give everyone a fair chance this is not an actual rule but id like people to try
3.Try not to vote for a poem because you know it's your friends
4. All kind of poems are accepted
5. For those who vote: i won't take in consideration your vote if i see ..."worse poem ever, crap, etc or any thing which might insult the author
6. Every person must let a comment
7. Do not stop voting a poem only if it has grammar spellings

-----------------------

Poem 1

Spoiler

The beauty of the night is deceiving
For my lonely heart
How i could fallen for those deep green eyes
Because in them i'm reading only lies
But gazing in those green eyes i'm seduced
And i can't break the spell which upon my heart
You put while under the moon are shining
Like the flame from two burning candles
I wonder if you felt the same like me
Every time under the moon spell while whispering
That you wish only for a moment the time to stop
And you to hear my heartbeat deep inside your soul
Now i pray to forget those eyes of yours
You left without a word letting my heart shattered
Empty again and only with the memory of those words
Which now are empty shells
Tonight the moon looks so cold toward me
Once the witness of your love
Tonight just a lonely star on the sky like me
I feel now the morning dew on my skin
The beautiful nocturnal dream for me is over
But i still can't forget those deceiving green eyes
Even is it hurting me i still wish to be only mine
Eternally to gaze in them

Poem 2

Spoiler

Inside is a powerful blast of inferno grasped the air, crash, boom, pop suddenly the flame appear,
all heart pounds instantly to thuds of pain,
as the eyes rapidly see how things go they desperately strain,
the fire spreads so quickly within the flow,
crackling, sizzling, and madness of chaotic nature jeers its head,
as one by one everybody, everyone and everything stops suddenly dead,
for a wandering of the beauty puts all mouths at awe,
the gorgeous gal doesn't seem to have a flaw,
as one step to another her gait does stroll,
A wow factor takes the males a toll,
then you look around and you see the guys bowing to her on the ground,
while there wives playfully, sometimes hard slap there neck a mound,
the eye dropping flame walks slowly by with a devious smirk of a smile,
a tease she seems to be and that could be her style,
as one knee cracks the ground begging for mercy of her beauty,
the heart throbbing princess moves timidly out of site,
leaving the painful strain of slobbering men wondering was that right,
there embarrassing lack of morale was probably for the gorgeous goddess a hilarious site,
but it was her loveliness that the men did blame,
to there partner they swear the cause of the claim,
as they quarrel up to the there stance slowly came,
a slap, a smack came a musical pound upon there skin with eminent nice aim,
the wives pull there ears to sorely show them how lame,
that they kneed down to that of the spark of a dame,
so attractive every gentlemen became a weak kneed boy just on the site of the fire of the beautiful flame!!

Poem 3

Spoiler

“I’m so sorry.”
I wonder who I’m apologising to.
Since then my memories have been scattered;
Did I want to forget? Did I wish to witness oblivion?
That’s the problem of gazing into the flames:
Sometimes you fall in too deep.
The fire doesn’t hurt; it just reminds me that I’m still alive; the sky is still empty; and the grass is still green.
But not even the cold dew can shake this feeling:
I am missing someone.

Poem 4

Spoiler

The End

Life is a burning flame
But yet it always will be the same
So beautiful, you want to fix your gaze
So deep, it only brings forth a haze

So little time you've kept a watchful eye
But the flame has already begun to die
You sit and think of progress you've made
As your vision slowly begins to fade

The body has weakened and starts to slip
As your hand falls from your loved one's grip
Eyes are wet from the tears they've cried
For you are the one who has left their side

But now, you are wide awake
So new your body begins to shake
The flame is lit and burns so bright
As you stare, it shows a new light

You learn again from times past
The morning dew, and the green of the grass
Such simple things, but you catch on fast
More and more as events come to pass

Once, your life had all but burnt out
But now you will rise and start to set out
Bearing witness to what was once the end
But realize you can only ever begin again

Poem 5

Spoiler

Passing Glances

Those fireworks bloomed sparkling flowers
High up above the dewy green
Then dripped away their dying flames;
Withered, whispering to earth

A demon soon possessed my gaze,
Which left the velvet, mossy stones
For gritty pavement and grass blades--
Clouded vision, cursèd choice

Regret's now deepened but not set,
That stain that soils nostalgia's cuff;
Scrub it threadbare? Or fold it back
Before time's endless witness?

Below the trees, we played guitars,
And sang, and laughed, and drank, and talked;
Luck led from here to there and back...
To this place of Quietude.

Poem 6

Spoiler

What a demon you’ve become,
Igniting my withered soul.
Like sweet red velvet cake,
Your whispered words melt in my ear.
A light flame in your eyes,
A deep gaze locks me in place.
As flames turn to emerald green,
I stare back at you.
Light dew clinging to our bodies,
I’m prepared for your embrace.
I bear witness now to this curse you’ve put on me.
My heart no longer feels like stone.

Poem 7

Spoiler

Unearthly Beauty

cloths of purple velvet
hairs as black as the night
unearthy eyes looking bright
A demon in humanform

who will put an curse on you
if you stare too much at her
A withered tree or green stone
seems a fitting spell to do

In a deep cave she would linger
Afraid of the sun's flame
you hear her whisper your name
before the dew appears on the grass

Then your destiny is sealed
to be drowed in her gaze
you have wandered in a maze
Oh witness of her unearthy beauty

don't you feel regret?
that you listened to her voice
to be brought to this place
or was it easy to forget?

__________________


Prize: A small Banner

[easternjohnny]

i read them all none title and all, the one who stood out could of been them all but i wont tell which one i picked, but still i picked one

[Metalicz]

people can easily see which one you picked. might as well say it =p

[easternjohnny]

yeah i know didn't you see i repeated one three times

[Metalicz]

your whole statement was as clear as mud

went with 7

[Shainabunny]

Poem 4 'The End' is amazing. The words flowed so well together and it has decent amount of depth to it.

I love the lines;
"So beautiful, you want to fix your gaze
So deep, it only brings forth a haze"

[narusasu1]

Poem 5 gets my vote in this one.

I never could get inspired to write again good luck to those who entered

[Shikamaruuu]

I'm going with Poem 3 this time. It's style is very unusual <:O

[Metalicz]

hurry someone vote for poem 2 and we can have a 7 way tie :O

[Leonella]

I liked most of all first one and 4th I guess I go with the first one - somehow it's a bit closer^^