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[joeboi112]

please please giv me honest opinions
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[CaptainRukiaKuchiki]

ok i've been able to see the first three pages cuz the others aren't shown.

The art is good if you're a beginner but you'll have to work more on it. I'm trying to be honest so nothing personal. I felt the body of the guy on the first page is a rectangle!

In the third page, the tears don't look realistic. They should be falling downwards and some teardrop flying in the air. Try to give it some background to get the users in the manga.

I'm no mangaka and i'm not good at arts too but that's how i saw it. I'm not offending your work...it's a good start

[joeboi112]

it all good thanks i prefer honesty to fake praise i no i fail at art im trying to put more emphasis into my story although obvly there isnt any on this first page it just takes time to do with all my other things in the way, thanks for replying