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Poem 1 22 26.51%
Poem 2 6 7.23%
Poem 3 6 7.23%
Poem 4 6 7.23%
Poem 5 13 15.66%
Poem 6 21 25.30%
Poem 7 9 10.84%
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Old 01-03-2012   #1 (permalink)
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Default Poetry Competition January Edition - Voting

Poetry Competition - January Edition

Rules:
  • The poll will close on 01-18-2012 .
  • Contestants may not vote for their own poem, no matter how good they think it is.
  • Please try to read the poems fully to give everyone a fair chance (this is not an actual rule, people should take everybody into consideration).
  • Don't vote a poem if you see has the most votes before reading the others to
  • Don't vote for a poem because you know it's your friend's poem (may lead to disqualification).
  • All kinds of poems are accepted.
  • You can enter with a poem or two
  • Don't post anything to insult the author (your vote will not count).
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Poem 1
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She & Me

Is my love story like candy & cookie
Written by someone who's not a bookie
A lil bit funny, a lil bit spookie
So shall we start and hear you say okie dookie
My first date and I'm all dandy
My pockets full of things that'd come handy
I take her to a place all sandy
With a kiss I share with her my candy
And we see the sun setting in the deep blue sea
The scene so sweet, like the nectar from a bee
Even though the sunset is an extraordinary beautie
She's no match for my love cause she be more cutie
I asked her, what her wishes would be
She whispered in my ear, that she only wishes for me
As I be the sound of her heart, her melody
And for her I wrote this parody
"In her eyes I see me
In my heart is only she
Cause she+me makes we
And thats how it should be"
Reading this she goes all touchie-touchie
She calls me her cootchie-wootchie
She cuddles me and I'm all merry merry
She kisses me and I taste her lips all cherry
And I see her blush like a strawberry
So I take her for a ride on a ferry
As I row I see her face full of glee
And towards far-far away we both flee!!



Poem 2

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"They"


The beauty of the flowers ,
Before your crystal eyes
Are fading away.
In them the lonely moon ,
Blossom like a rose .

Oh ,my beloved angel ,
In this lost Eden
I shall wait for you
Because beyond the white desert
Here is nothing but sadness.

Your fingertips
I still feel them on my body
Burning like fire
In my sinful heart
I feel fear and pain .

In the snow like a tattoo
Frozen in time is a rose
Which you once draw
Was a promise which you made
That forever together we'll shall be .

I hear a thunder
I fear i broke my promise
I hear your scream
I can't reach your face no more
In this white curtain like mist .

The broken words of yours
Made my world become hollow
And on the sacred snow
I will draw a scattered heart
And farewell my love

Farewell,
Farewell,
Both said in one thought.
Here is nothing but sadness.
All been just an illusion
Of the fate.



Poem 3
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Brimstone

A cold sense shoots is frightening fierce frost bite,
The earth turning to eminent sheet of glistening blackened ice,
Glazing icicles hang with speckling melting glee,
Incoming is power strengthen snow of sheer fear.

Hidden within all spelunking caverns,
Odor of churning char,
Bubbles of Magma gripping the trembling earth,
Rumbling with explosive fight of flaming light.

Combining stress bursts into fireball scatter,
Gaseous portions driven to expansion brink,
Luminous glares reaches darkened chilled atmosphere,
Pressure cooling thaw turns the fire to raging rocks,

Downfalls the brimstone onto larva filled molding death,
Villages are conquered by shock waves,
The earth emptiness leaves barren,
Scolding orbs clamp the land one by one,
Brimstone might has taken over.

Cooling off in ashes waist next smelting day,
The weakened regulars expand eerily back within the powdered gray,
Gazing dreadfully around every which way,
Phew! That was one Freaking Hot Day!


Poem 4

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Lost Soul


A shy ray of morning sunlight
darkness disappearing in this golden light
until the night comes again
this witch isn't a twilight fan


casting a spell for eternal love
flying demons coming from above
lusting on low human creatures
the growing picture of the adventures


heaven tears falls like rain
for the lost souls and their pain
for those who took a wrong turn
at a crossroad and now they burn


that is what you would see in this cold
yet shy sunlight that is trying to be bold
yellow and red fighting the velvet darkness
this battle is really endless


but that doesn't mean they can be found
sometimes it is hidden deep underground
too faraway to be saved by you
nothing for this lost soul you can do


but you can shed your tears for those
until the darkness isn't as close
then you will be able to get near
and to remove this lost soul's fear



Poem 5

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Answer

Often asked
"Are you really sad?"
The answer is simple
But complex all the same

Call it what you will
Depression
Lack of self-esteem
Hatred pointed inward

I cut myself open
Pouring out on to the page
Blood-filled emotions
And Ink-filled tears

I saturate the paper
Hang it out in the open
Scars left visible
Exposed for all to see

The wound slowly heals
Neatly sewn shut
Until I find another clean sheet



Poem 6

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"Heart Of Solace"

He flew to her as she sat in her bedroom
Ready to take her life's' sweet nectar
She looked up with a face so gloom
Wrapped into his arms soft shelter

He brushed aside her hair for a simple kiss
Taking in her scent, relishing her lips
Her heartbeat throbbed so heavily with bliss
No longer caring or trying to resist

He slowly moves to the nape of her neck
Closing his mouth around her soft skin
He draws her blood with only a peck
She's lost in pleasure and reigning sin

As the blood runs down his sated lips
A moan sounds from her lonely soul
Saddend by her love's eclipse
He kisses her again to make her whole

As he leaves heading into the moonlight
She begs and pleads for him to stay
He promises her he'll return the next night
If only she smiles and shows no dismay
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Poem 7

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Listen


Listen to the wind how heartless
He whispering beautiful lies
From pieces of broken words
Written on the burning sky
With fire by shattered angels.

Listen how the sky is crying ,
Trying to extinguish the flame
From the fallen angels hearts.
Flames of sorrow and emptiness
Between them is only a void.

Listen how the blaze pass on,
While the tears become ice,
Frozen their hearts in time
How they seek their immortality
Through fire, ice and lies .

Listen how a old letter whisper
A long forgotten love in night
From a time which fade away
A love between two twins souls
But in the end were only rotten,
Hearts of two shattered angels.

Listen to the world whispers,
How is crying in silence ,
Away for those which fall
In a deep abyss of madness
Without a way to come back
Of what they were in the past.

But tonight the stars will shine,
Dancing for the last time
Before the downs for them
While in the world arms
They will go alone
How they always been .
In the end listen
How the hearts are bleeding .



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sooo here it is!!!
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lol yes
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lol yes
15 days of voting 2
now thats good to here i can visit here later also after my practical exams!!!
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I liked the first one as i liked the rhymes in it a lot
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ayeeeeeeeeeee thanks for voting!!!
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ayeeeeeeeeeee thanks for voting!!!
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i love your set btw!!!
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Thanks for that. Well i cant beat your sig though i liked it very much natsu/lucy.
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I really liked number 7. All the other ones were good too. It as a tough choice. But number 7 grabbed my attention the most. Good word rhyming,word choices and flows nice.
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