Story Contest May Edition - Voting

[easternjohnny]

i try to do my best, so if you are overly out there on lovey dovey stuff well you know what his words be, Payne will get you, so bring on Naruto if you can find him..lol

well the voters are waiting and thank you for mingling reading

[Dany1908]

lol is important to the story but ac members can live without that part
i already posted the full on other part

[thurnwenthil]

were are you going to post it or are you going to change your entery with the one I read alread?

[Dany1908]

lol no the entry will remain this
i was talking after contest

[thurnwenthil]

ooh in your story thread.
I wish you could post the original version it is soo much better then this one.
what did payne say about it

[Dany1908]

didn't asked him yet

[thurnwenthil]

ooh okay.
let me know what he says about it

[Dany1908]

i think will be a big no :O

[thurnwenthil]

maybe.
but if you only shorten the first or the second paragraphe maybe he will allowed it.
didn't htink it was that yaoi more a bit of light shounen ai

[Dany1908]

yes more a shounen-ai but lol
yes i could cut the second paragraph
:O

and if someone wan't to read i pm -.- meh